im so happy finding someone using english. good job.
i have to say your English is not bad,keep learning,dont give up.
u dont need to focus on the mistakes, even americans make mistakes everyday when they speak english. if you want to improve your english more, i strongly recommend US TV series,such as <friends> <modern family> etc,or u can watch all the great english movies. u could easily find them in the internet, such as youku.com
if u have a dream, you've got to protect it! Ask yourself want you really want, and that is the only thing that matters. Good Luck!
十年前就发疯地学Waiting For A Girl Like You 这首歌，唱这首歌。虽然英文一直很差，但这歌表达的意境和旋律却如此美妙、如此真切、深入人心。呼唤着一种怀旧的味道，一种失去后才痛心的味道，一种得不到才是最好的味道，一种自我感觉良好将爱无处安放的味道，总之一种淡淡的孤高自怜无法触及的最美的梦境。
So long, I've been looking too hard,
I've been waiting too longSometimes I don't know what I will find,
I only know it's a matter of timeWhen you love someone,
when you love someoneIt feels so right, so warm and true, I need to know if you feel it too
再见了，我已期待太苦，我已受尽熬煎有时我不清楚会得到什么，只知时间会作出决断当你爱上某人，当你爱上某人看上去那样般配，那样温暖和真诚，我想知道你是否也有同感
Maybe I'm wrong, won't you tell me if I'm coming on too strongThis heart of mine has been hurt before, this time I wanna be sure
也许是我的错,别告诉我如果我强扮欢颜这颗心以前受过伤，这次也不能幸免
I've been waiting for a girl like you to come into my lifeI've been waiting for a girl like you, your loving will surviveI've been waiting for someone new to make me feel aliveYeah, waiting for a girl like you to come into my life
我一直在等待一个象你一样的女孩与我融为一体我一直在等待一个象你一样的女孩，延续你的情意我一直在等待新人使我恢复活力哦，等待一个象你一样的女孩与我融为一体
You're so good, when we make love it's understoodIt's more than a touch or a word can sayonly in dreams could it be this wayWhen you love someone, yeah, really love someone
千言万语都不能述说我们在一起才会明白，你是那样妙不可言当你爱上某人，哦，真地爱上某人只有在梦中才能体验
Now I know it's right, from the moment I wake up till deep in the nightThere's nowhere on earth that I'd rather be than holding you tenderly
此刻我知道那是对的，从那以后我一直深夜无眠世上再也无处寻找拥抱你的温柔情感
I've been waiting for a girl like you to come into my lifeI've been waiting for a girl like you, your loving will surviveI've been waiting for someone new to make me feel aliveYeah, waiting for a girl like you to come into my life
一直在等待一个象你一样的女孩与我融为一体我一直在等待一个象你一样的女孩，延续你的情意我一直在等待新人使我恢复活力
哦，等待一个象你一样的女孩与我融为一体
I've been waiting, waiting for you,ooh, I've been waiting(I've been waiting for a girl like you, I've been waiting)Won't you come into my life?
我一直在等待，等待你，哦，我一直在等待我一直在等待一个象你一样的女孩，我一直在等待你是否会与我融为一体？
I am in here waitting for u。。。。here/there 前不用in/at...等——
I am here waitting for u
There is such a long time that i havent written in English to express about my inside world.
Maybe because i dont want all the person can understand me or others question .
I ask myself for so many times to find the answer for me ,But the sad is that i still standing in a lose .
These days i usually fell upset and nervous about my future .It is really a problem for me .
As the time goes by, my family really trouble me a lot .Any way ,no matter how urgently that rush me, i always in my way with firmly spirit . No one can push me into a mess .
There is only one thing i belive that is fate .I sincerely belive that one day my dream will be come true .But when it will comes ? It is belong to the time .I will always ready in active attitude towards my life .
Hey , that man? Where are you now ?Are you just looking for me ?Never mind, i am just standing here waitting for you .
不改了，我很懒。。。。。。。。。
There is such a long time that i havent written in English to express about my inside world.
Maybe because i dont want all the person can understand me or others question （other questions）.
I ask myself for so many times to find the answer for（ for在此搭配Find。。搭配answer的话用to觉得合适, 还有做Vi时answer for对。。负责） me ,But the sad is that i still standing in a lose .
These days i usually fell upset and nervous about my future .It is really a problem for（是否to会好些？） me .
As the time goes by, my family really trouble me a lot .Any way ,no matter how urgently that rush me, i am （谓词不能少哈） always in my way with firmly spirit . No one can push me into a mess .
There is only one thing i belive that is fate .I sincerely belive that one day my dream will be come true （be 觉得去掉好） .But when it will comes（s觉得去掉好） ? It is belong to the time .I will always ready in active attitude towards my life .
Hey , that man? Where are you now ?Are you just looking for me ?Never mind, i am just standing here waitting for you .
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发表于 2012/9/29 12:55
跟几个帖就可以动真情了，怪不得现在真爱可以批发。
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